PLAYING GOD Chapter 15

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PLAYING GOD Chapter 15

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Nothing beats PG!

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Very exciting, lots of action.

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another great one boys!

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YAHOOO! Good one. Great, even. Let's keep up this much improved release sched, eh fellas? :wink:

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The pencil and inks on the bottom panels of pages 75 and 76 are really, really, really good!
I loved this installment!
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I like the appearance of Sniper! :thumb:

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the panel with Torque and the back of 'mingo is wonderfully drawn.

Also the bottom panel on pg 75 and 76 are professional as anyone. Well done Hobo. The bottom of pg. 76 is cover-worthy.

As for the writing..... the best thing I can say is...... when is the next one coming out? I feel that the momentum has been building at the right speed..... now we just need to find out what is going to happen.


I do have 1 question...... on the top right of pg. 75....... the creature looks... different. what the heck is that?


And nice preview art for the next installment. :clap:

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Elveen wrote:the panel with Torque and the back of 'mingo is wonderfully drawn.

Also the bottom panel on pg 75 and 76 are professional as anyone. Well done Hobo. The bottom of pg. 76 is cover-worthy.

As for the writing..... the best thing I can say is...... when is the next one coming out? I feel that the momentum has been building at the right speed..... now we just need to find out what is going to happen.


I do have 1 question...... on the top right of pg. 75....... the creature looks... different. what the heck is that?


And nice preview art for the next installment. :clap:
Good catch. Think SW:TPM

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Looking forward to chapter 16. :clap:

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Fanboy375 wrote:
Elveen wrote:the panel with Torque and the back of 'mingo is wonderfully drawn.

Also the bottom panel on pg 75 and 76 are professional as anyone. Well done Hobo. The bottom of pg. 76 is cover-worthy.

As for the writing..... the best thing I can say is...... when is the next one coming out? I feel that the momentum has been building at the right speed..... now we just need to find out what is going to happen.


I do have 1 question...... on the top right of pg. 75....... the creature looks... different. what the heck is that?


And nice preview art for the next installment. :clap:
Good catch. Think SW:TPM

Fanboy..... yous gots some splainin to do..... :D

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Elveen wrote:
Fanboy375 wrote:
Elveen wrote:the panel with Torque and the back of 'mingo is wonderfully drawn.

Also the bottom panel on pg 75 and 76 are professional as anyone. Well done Hobo. The bottom of pg. 76 is cover-worthy.

As for the writing..... the best thing I can say is...... when is the next one coming out? I feel that the momentum has been building at the right speed..... now we just need to find out what is going to happen.


I do have 1 question...... on the top right of pg. 75....... the creature looks... different. what the heck is that?


And nice preview art for the next installment. :clap:
Good catch. Think SW:TPM

Fanboy..... yous gots some splainin to do..... :D
I have said too much as it is! Dont want Hobo and Della putting a beat down on me.

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Someone requested that Jar Jar die. We were more than happy to oblige. :wink:
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Fanboy375 wrote: I have said too much as it is! Dont want Hobo and Della putting a beat down on me.
Yeah be careful, Hobo swings a mean bat....

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Daniel Jackson wrote:
Fanboy375 wrote: I have said too much as it is! Dont want Hobo and Della putting a beat down on me.
Yeah be careful, Hobo swings a mean bat....
It's only digital . . . :(
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X-O HoboJoe wrote:
Daniel Jackson wrote:
Fanboy375 wrote: I have said too much as it is! Dont want Hobo and Della putting a beat down on me.
Yeah be careful, Hobo swings a mean bat....
It's only digital . . . :(

At least it is not detachable.

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Post by bamaphilosopher »

I agree that Sniper (formerly X-Calibur and changed so Marvel wouldn't sue) is a nice touch.

And so is Erica Pierce! I didn't expect that! Of course, the problem with that is you don't explain how someone went and got her from her self-imposed "hell" after Unity (I presume Gilad sent Pete after her? I assume Solar is not in play, since Valiant doesn't technically have the rights anymore? I assume this because I don't remember seeing Turok, Magnus, or Solar mentioned at all in previous installments.)

I also like the appearance of Albert at the end, raising the question of whether the "god" is just messing with Erica (as he did playing Torque for Flamingo), or if Albert actually is the "god," which would actually be very interesting.

Either way, you're keeping the suspense of who the bad guy is to the end. Very nicely done!

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bamaphilosopher wrote:Erica Pierce
There's at least one more scantily clad powerful woman in the Valiant universe.

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magnusr wrote:
bamaphilosopher wrote:Erica Pierce
There's at least one more scantily clad powerful woman in the Valiant universe.

/Magnus
a galaxy in her own right....

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magnusr wrote:
bamaphilosopher wrote:Erica Pierce
There's at least one more scantily clad powerful woman in the Valiant universe.

/Magnus
In other words, that's not Erica!!! Think A&A 6

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Man, I gotta learn to draw. :oops:
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X-O HoboJoe wrote:Man, I gotta learn to draw. :oops:
Oh, please.

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magnusr wrote:
bamaphilosopher wrote:Erica Pierce
There's at least one more scantily clad powerful woman in the Valiant universe.

/Magnus
:?

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Fanboy375 wrote:
magnusr wrote:
bamaphilosopher wrote:Erica Pierce
There's at least one more scantily clad powerful woman in the Valiant universe.

/Magnus
In other words, that's not Erica!!! Think A&A 6
I think it's seeing our resident baddie turn into Albert that leads people to think it's Erica.


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