PLAYING GOD Chapter 7

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:59:00 pm

Link to Chapter 8
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greg · Post by **greg** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 7:44:51 pm

jedimarley · Post by **jedimarley** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:11:05 pm

You guys fired KC?

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:21:42 pm

jedimarley wrote:You guys fired KC?

Not at all. We hope to have him back in the future but as they say, the show must go on.

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:38:38 pm

jedimarley wrote:You guys fired KC?

I'd fire myself first . . .

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:46:17 pm

I like the way things are unfolding, can't wait for the next installment.

Btw, the last panel with Shadowman is awesome.

IanAlexavier · Post by **IanAlexavier** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:26:28 pm

looking great guys!! One suggestion: Be sure to name who is who in the dialogue at least once a segment.. Sometimes I have trouble remembering who is who

I think it is a common thing to do in monthly titles, just in case a new reader picks up an issue. Just an idea..

Great job!!

SmokinAFuente · Post by **SmokinAFuente** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:42:53 pm

Lookin good!

Will there be a pdf file?

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:45:18 pm

SmokinAFuente wrote:Lookin good!

Will there be a pdf file?

No pdf planned at the moment.

Elveen · Post by **Elveen** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:00:49 am

I really am excited to see where this is going.

The end is great.

1 question, what is up with the Geomancers in the credits?

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:03:46 am

Elveen wrote:I really am excited to see where this is going.

The end is great.

1 question, what is up with the Geomancers in the credits?

The Geomancers are our special helpers. They have an inside look and help us work out the kinks of the story before it hits the general audience.

Elveen · Post by **Elveen** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:05:23 am

dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:I really am excited to see where this is going.

The end is great.

1 question, what is up with the Geomancers in the credits?
The Geomancers are our special helpers. They have an inside look and help us work out the kinks of the story before it hits the general audience.

I figured that was it. You could not have picked a better set of geomancers.

I still think you dudes need to do a hard copy when it is all done.

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:39:56 am

IanAlexavier wrote:looking great guys!! One suggestion: Be sure to name who is who in the dialogue at least once a segment.. Sometimes I have trouble remembering who is who

I think it is a common thing to do in monthly titles, just in case a new reader picks up an issue. Just an idea..

Great job!!

It would help if I didn't make everyone look the same . . .

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:40:40 am

Elveen wrote:
dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:I really am excited to see where this is going.

The end is great.

1 question, what is up with the Geomancers in the credits?
The Geomancers are our special helpers. They have an inside look and help us work out the kinks of the story before it hits the general audience.

I figured that was it. You could not have picked a better set of geomancers.

I still think you dudes need to do a hard copy when it is all done.

Need to talk to the BIG Geomancer for that.

jedimarley · Post by **jedimarley** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:20:49 am

dellamorte wrote:
jedimarley wrote:You guys fired KC?
Not at all. We hope to have him back in the future but as they say, the show must go on.

OK.

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 9:40:12 am

Niiice. Very good job of dropping hints and setting the stage for what's to come.

I'm digging this so much, I haven't even once lobbied you all to thaw out Bloodshot.

Erm...

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:24:35 pm

BloodOfHeroes wrote:Niiice. Very good job of dropping hints and setting the stage for what's to come.

I'm digging this so much, I haven't even once lobbied you all to thaw out Bloodshot.

Erm...

If I were "god," he'd be one of the first one's I'd find a way to take out.

k_c_collectibles · Post by **k_c_collectibles** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:11:16 pm

GREAT job guys!

Sorry I have not been available to work on the project. This is the first time in at least a few weeks I have even been online. Too damn many bad things going on in my life at the moment.

There is light at the end of the tunnel though - I just hope it is not a train!

Chris

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:47:00 pm

Nice to see you back, KC.

Sorry you have some bad things going on right now. Hope everything works out for you.

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:29:54 pm

Daniel Jackson wrote:Nice to see you back, KC.

Sorry you have some bad things going on right now. Hope everything works out for you.

Brother J · Post by **Brother J** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:33:16 pm

k_c_collectibles wrote:GREAT job guys!

Sorry I have not been available to work on the project. This is the first time in at least a few weeks I have even been online. Too damn many bad things going on in my life at the moment.

There is light at the end of the tunnel though - I just hope it is not a train!
Chris

hang in there, bro! Better things are ahead!

etos45 · Post by **etos45** » Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:35:48 am

Another great read!

Still excited to see where all of this is going... especially with Shadowman!

Zaphod · Post by **Zaphod** » Mon Oct 06, 2008 7:17:42 am

ummmmm, I love the story....but I think there is a bit of an error to this chapter, though hopefully corrected in the graphic novel release.

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Mon Oct 06, 2008 8:01:59 am

Zaphod wrote:ummmmm, I love the story....but I think there is a bit of an error to this chapter, though hopefully corrected in the graphic novel release.

Oy! Spill it so we know what to fix.

BTW -- dig the new name, Mr. Beeblebrox.

Zaphod · Post by **Zaphod** » Mon Oct 06, 2008 9:20:37 am

X-O HoboJoe wrote:
Zaphod wrote:ummmmm, I love the story....but I think there is a bit of an error to this chapter, though hopefully corrected in the graphic novel release.

Oy! Spill it so we know what to fix.

BTW -- dig the new name, Mr. Beeblebrox.

heh, thanks. I go by Zaphod most other message boards I freqquent. I still don't know why I didn't initially sign up that way here.

I figured that out because I got a nasty virus Thursday night, spent most of Friday reinstalling stuff and then another 10 minutes at Vfans.com messageboards, cursing because I couldn't recall my password.

Then I remembered I used a different username here.

Well correct me if I am wrong, and I was hesitant to say it but it seems like the art (sorry) for the character in panels 4,5,6 on page 32 is Peter is all stubbly, but has longer hair. but throughout the rest of the chapter Peter is clean shaven?

maybe I am just confused, which I put much stock in seeing as 3:50am came real quick this morning